AARGGHH, "every day" is two words! Unless you're using it as an adjective (which is vulgar anyway).
Not too bad, although not a lot of point. Give it another twenty years or so and it'll be pretty good. I wondered if he'd look any different at the end, so I flicked between the start and the finish and he does look slightly older.
He could help the thing out by experimenting with different hairstyles or something.