Part one introduced Zia, the young female mage prodigy, Yun, the protective and infatuated Archmaester of the school, and described Zia’s miraculous early progress through her mage training. In part two, the intense pressures being placed on Zia from cruel professors, jealous female students, and obsessed male students begin to take their toll. There are minor confrontations, grueling rituals, unprecedented promotions, and a catastrophic departure from the Academy that breaks walls, gates, hearts, and the bodies of quite a few men who put themselves in the wrong place at the very wrong time.
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“These are fifth level students. Their dormitory is behind that wall.” The wall to which Shien referred was now a heap of bricks from which dust was still billowing.
“Zia.” I said, my voice full of worry for her safety. Shien heard me, but leapt to a different conclusion. “She has the power to destroy like this. I fear she was finally pushed too far.”